Updated 29 Oct, 11 - 3 Comments.

i stumbled in the dark searchimg,stumbleing.screaming for the moon.Istumbled my toe upon a rock,and awakened with start.My eyes blind with light saw the moon resting safe within my heart.?

  • (Private Profile) - 27 Oct, 11
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    Clear concise English with a beginning, middle and an end in sentence structure - and with a clear idea would be a terrific start.

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